After thoroughly reading through my essay and getting feedback from my professor, I realized I had a strong argument but so much more I could improve on such as clarity, more personal voice, and more of a counterclaim. After spending an hour making revisions on my paper I am much more confident about it. I added more personal examples and used my research more to support my argument whether than making it the argument itself.
Argument Essay First Revision
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